I’m Tom. I was born in a happy middle-class family. My father is a merchant who is selling clothes. My mother was a house wife, but in recent years, she began to work. And my brother is a junior high school student. My father didn’t teach me any principle on purpose, but I still learned many things from him in daily life. He is a merchant, so he knows the way to get along with people very well. So I learned some way to approach people from him. My mother always plans everything carefully, for example, she will think twice before buying things. This caused me never to do everything without thinking. And my brother is energetic, so my life is colorful instead of being boring. I am very lucky to born in this family which gives me many precious things, including invisible and visible things.
你爸交你如何與人相處那你怎會變成降子
回覆刪除有些文法好像有錯
然後你哥很ENERGETIC跟你的人生COLORFUL有何關聯
應該要多敘述一點
I am very lucky to born 應該是原型動詞bear
回覆刪除This caused me never to do everything without thinking
這句怪怪的ㄟ
整篇的時態都亂參雜ㄟ
And my brother is energetic, so my life is colorful instead of being boring. 這句分開寫吧
回覆刪除有一些要用語現在事實相反的文法喔
摁..因該要多在多點敘述然後真的 energetic和colorfu有什麼關係呢...?
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