I am a person who is shy and introverted by nature. When I just came to the class, I knew no one, and I afraid of talking to others. But, fortunately, my classmates was friendly, they talked to me continuously, so I can naturally talk to them eventually. Now, I even can stand on stage giving a speech.
Everyone got along with one another in my class. As a result, our class is very united. In addition to union, we are effortful. For example, when the interclass volleyball games approached, we would practice together, so we finally got the good grades in the games. Moreover, we got the award “class of honor” and continue for four semesters.
I am major in English. In the three years in high school, I learn how to write a essay, how to read articles and so on. Although most of my time is spent on English, I still have other habits. For example, after school I come to learn Japanese. I like Japanese, so I even join the Japanese conversation club.
很多明顯的文法錯誤喔
回覆刪除而且你一開始就應該說你在哪間學校哪個科系唸書
內容感覺太短了
高中三年應該不只有這些吧?
Although most of my time is spent on English?
回覆刪除這什麼東西啦?
I afraid of > I am afraid of
回覆刪除we got the award “class of honor” and continue for four semesters. 連接詞時態一致吧!
然後還有些時態問題...因該要多點在三年中有學到什麼吧 感覺你沒什麼敘述到...
I afraid of talking to others 沒動詞
回覆刪除有幾句沒有連接詞
時態一樣錯亂
然後最後一段感覺沒有結論句
你學習到的你也寫的太奇怪了吧
例如 你再高中三年就只會讀文章? 懂了吧