2011年3月2日 星期三

A voluntary experience

  I once lived in Taipei, and worked as a volunteer in a hospital. It really felt good to get the opportunities to help people. One morning an elderly woman with a basket filled with fruit was seen by me to stand in front of a room with her face looking tired. I knew the woman. She was strange because she had hurt legs were damaged but she still insists on walking upstairs. In the room lived a teenager.  In an accident, In order to help his grandmother, he had his legs broken. I walked up to her and asked her what I could do for her. She smiled exhaustedly at me and asked me to send the fruit to the teenagers, and then we heard some voice in the room. The teenager wanted to go out and was using the wheelchair. I want the teenager to thank this woman visiting him constantly. But, as soon as the voice was close to the door, the elderly woman left nervously with her legs lamely walking. The teenager opened the door and asked me to take him to take a walk, we went downstairs with elevator. So, we missed the woman. 

9 則留言:

  1. It really felt "food" to....."good"

    In an accident. 是,吧?


    because although怪怪的..

    結尾地方似乎跟當一個義工很高興有機會幫助別人沒什麼關係欸...

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  2. It really felt food to get the opportunities to help people. food->good , opportunities單數就好了吧??

    One morning an elderly woman with a basket filled with fruit was seen by me to stand in front of a room with her face looking tired.那個to stand是不是要改成ing或者ed還是原形的反正不會是to+v吧??

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  3. was seen by me to stand standing吧不太確定我對不對

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  4. was seen by me (to stand) in front of a room 因該是standing吧

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  5. and asked me to take him to take a walk →asked me for help to take a walk with him

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  6. women 變成複數了

    有點不懂!

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  7. It really felt good 主詞要是人吧

    she had hurt legs were damaged 文法怪

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