We are Taiwanese. And we came here to travel in our vacation, but Jay, my classmate, got lost. Following are his appearance. The first thing you can see is his medium height. Second, he is a teenaged man looks young . Third, he is thin and a little muscular. Then, he has a head of black, straight, short hair. Finally, he wears glasses which has black thick frame. If you saw him, please call me. Thank you!
following 要不要改成 follow below比較好
回覆刪除he is a teenaged man looks young ....好像怪怪的
回覆刪除應該改成he is a teenaged man ,SO HE looks young.
Following 應該可以加s吧
回覆刪除black thick frame有這種說法嗎?
回覆刪除he is a teenaged man looks young
回覆刪除你是省略關代who嗎? 怪怪的
he wears glasses which has black thick frame
he wears a pair of glasses....會更好
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