Expressing an Opnion 2

I think that students should wear uniform to school. First, every wears same costumes so that no one has to worry about what to wear or how to dress. It won’t bother students. Also, if I were a guest and I went to the school and saw that every one wears uniform, I would think the school is in order rather in a mess. Finally, if you got into trouble after school and you wore uniform then, the teachers or instructors in your school could recognize in no time and help you. In conclusion, although the uniforms aren’t more beautiful than our clothes, it has many benefits our clothes doesn’t has, so I think it is not bad to wear uniforms.

Expressing an Opnion 1

I oppose using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. First, the temperature of sea water around the nuclear power plant will rise so that there will be a coral bleaching. Second, nuclear power isn’t natural and it isn’t renewable energy. It is bad to our environment. Finally, should a nature disaster such as an earthquake or tsunami and so on taken place, nuclear plant would have a lot of damages. The surroundings will be deeply polluted. To sum up, I think that it is not true that using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis, it has many flaws.

comparing 1 revise

There are two driver’s licenses. And there are some informations on the licenses. The following are their some similarity. Firstly, both of them are from the Department of Motor Vehicles in the Alabama State. Besides, both of the two motor owners have brown eye color, black hair color. Then, they are alike in height. They are all 5'3''. Finally, they were born on the same date, 7/31/70. The two people's imformations are so similar that it could make people think that they are twins.

comparing 2 revise

John and Thomas are two very important people in modern history. And they have some similarity. First, they were both born in the 18^th century. Then, although they were not born on the same day, they died on the same date. Second, both John and Thomas played important role in American Revolution. Third, John had delegated to the Continental Congress and had been the president of United States, and so had Thomas. Finally, both of Thomas and John studied and practiced law and was the signer of Independence. . To sum up, I think their most similar place is that they are both great and make many contributions to America.

Contrasting-2

I would hire Lynn for this job. First, although she has less education about English than Debra, she still had been an English instructor once, so I think she has enough professional knowledge to take this job. Second, although her experience is less than Debra, I think that it is enough, too. Third, she is influent in more language than Debra, so I consider her to be a person of many capabilities and passion to learn new things. Finally, she had got the Excellence in Teaching Award, but Debra hadn’t. So, I think that she can teach better than Debra and that she knows how to make students study more. To sum up, maybe Debra knew more than Lynn, but, in addition to professional knowledge, teaching is of central importance, too. So, I chose Lynn to be the English Instructor.

Contrasting-1

I would choose Fairfax Apartment as my place. First, there are more bedrooms in it so that I can use one to do other things, such as doing exercise, using computer and so on. Second, the room in Fairfax is furnished so that I don’t have to worry about that. What I need to do is bring the things I like to there. Finally, there is no pet so I won’t encounter the little animals, like dogs, cats and so on. Although Fairfax is more expensive, it is really a better choice for me.

comparing 3

Brian and Jay are my classmates and they have many similarity. First, both of them like sports, such as volley ball, basketball and so on. Second, Brian likes to sleep in classes, and so does Jay. Finally, they don’t study hard and often fail to exams. To sum up, they are really very similar in some way.

Describing a person --revise

We are Taiwanese. And we came here to travel in our vacation, but Jay, my classmate, got lost. The following is his appearance. The first thing you can see is his medium height. Second, he is a teenaged man, so he looks young . Third, he is thin and a little muscular. Then, he has a head of black, straight, short hair. Finally, he wears a pair of glasses with black thick frame. If you saw him, please call me. Thank you!

giving reasons -revise

I like the Moon Festival the most. There are some reasons. First, we hardly have chances to barbecue, but in the day we can barbecue without worries. And, what is better, when we barbecue, we can watch the clear and bright moon. Besides, we can get together with some relatives, then, I can chat with them that we have not seen for a long time.Thirdly, we can play firework crazily like a child at night. The fireworks are so beautiful and splendid that it can catch all our eyes. Last but not least, on the Moon Festival, we can pass a leisure day and have fun. To sum up, my favorite holiday is Moon Festival, and it is also worthy of being expected this year.