I think that students should wear uniform to school. First, every wears same costumes so that no one has to worry about what to wear or how to dress. It won’t bother students. Also, if I were a guest and I went to the school and saw that every one wears uniform, I would think the school is in order rather in a mess. Finally, if you got into trouble after school and you wore uniform then, the teachers or instructors in your school could recognize in no time and help you. In conclusion, although the uniforms aren’t more beautiful than our clothes, it has many benefits our clothes doesn’t has, so I think it is not bad to wear uniforms.
every wears....
回覆刪除是每個人嗎
還不錯喔喔
用dress up應該比較貼切
回覆刪除然後單複數要注意
不要講同一樣東西上一句是單數 下一句又變複數
*everyone wears
回覆刪除其他還可以
every wears same costumes so that no one has to worry about what to wear or how to dress. --> everyones wears ....
回覆刪除In conclusion, although the uniforms aren’t more beautiful ........so I think it is not bad to wear uniforms.--> Although ,so不能出現在同一個句子吧(?!)
很好欸:D
回覆刪除First, every wears same costumes so that no one has to worry about what to wear or how to dress every wears 是不是少了什麼東西？
回覆刪除it has many benefits our clothes doesn’t has, so I think it is not bad to wear uniforms.
ｂｅｎｅｆｉｔｓ是不是少了介係詞?