giving reasons -revise

I like the Moon Festival the most. There are some reasons. First, we hardly have chances to barbecue, but in the day we can barbecue without worries. And, what is better, when we barbecue, we can watch the clear and bright moon. Besides, we can get together with some relatives, then, I can chat with them that we have not seen for a long time.Thirdly, we can play firework crazily like a child at night. The fireworks are so beautiful and splendid that it can catch all our eyes. Last but not least, on the Moon Festival, we can pass a leisure day and have fun. To sum up, my favorite holiday is Moon Festival, and it is also worthy of being expected this year.