Best of the Semester 3

I oppose using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. First, because nuclear power plant will release its heat to the sea around it, so the temperature of sea water around the nuclear power plant will rise so that there will be a coral bleaching. Second,unlike water and wind, nuclear power isn't natural and it isn't renewable energy. It is bad to our environment. Finally, should a nature disaster such as an earthquake or tsunami and so on taken place, nuclear plant would have a lot of damages. The surroundings will be deeply polluted. To sum up, I think that it is not true that using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. It has many flaws and bad influence on the environment.

Best of the Semester 2

I think that students should wear uniform to school. First, everyone wears same costumes so that no one has to worry about what to wear or how to dress up. It won’t bother students. Also, if I were a guest and I went to the school and saw that every one wears uniform, I would think the school is in order rather in a mess. Finally, if you got into trouble after school and you wore uniform then, the teachers or instructors in your school could recognize you in no time and help you. In conclusion, although the uniforms aren’t more beautiful than our clothes, it has many benefits our clothes doesn’t has, so I think it is not bad to wear uniforms.

Best of the Semester 1

I would hire Lynn for this job for the following reasons. First, although she has less education about English than Debra, she still had been an English instructor once, so I think she has enough professional knowledge to take this job. Second, although her experience is less than Debra, I think that it is enough, too. Third, she is influent in more language than Debra, so I consider her to be a person of many capabilities and passion to learn new things. Finally, she had got the Excellence in Teaching Award, but Debra hadn’t. So, I think that she can teach better than Debra and that she knows how to make students study more. To sum up, maybe Debra knew more than Lynn, but, in addition to professional knowledge, teaching is of central importance, too. So, I chose Lynn to be the English Instructor.

Discussing effect 2 revised

Global warming will bring some effects to the earth and our daily life. First, the glaciers will melt down so that the ocean level will rise. And then many lands will be covered with sea water. Second, if the temperature continuously rise, more and more species will be endangered so that there will be less biodiversity in the world. Finally, if the temperature is too high, people will turn on the coolers,fans and airconditionerd to feel comfortable, but it will cause the waste of electricity. Moreover, using electricity will make the concentration of carbon dioxide increase. To sum up, global warming  influents our daily life and future very much, and it is high time for us to do something for this situation.

Discussing effect 1 revised

Opening a new factory can have some positive effects. First of all, it can bring the small town more jobs so that the economics of the small town will be better because the people will have more consuming ability. Second, if the people there work for the factory, they will have money, they could buy more modern and novel things so that their quality of life will be advanced. Finally, more jobs can absolutely attract more people so that the town will be more bustling, and the people's lives can be more coloreful. In conclusion, opening a new factory can make many benefits, and they can make an area more advanced.

Discussing Cause 2 revised

 Michael opened a small music store but it was out of business soon. There are some reasons for why the store closed so fast. First, Michael's music store is not very far from the two large music stores, so the two store will share the guests with the music store. As a result, the store's guests and income will decrease. Second, most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. The kinds are too few for guests to select. And, that will decrease the guests' willingness of come to the store, too. The shop was open Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 P.M. But most people don't go shopping in the time, and the time was too short, too. So, of course, the guests will be few. Finally, Mr. Williams wouldn't accept checks or credit cards. The inconvenient restriction would lower the customers' willingness of buying the CDs in the store. To sum up, the owner made many mistakes, so it has been predictable that the store would close soon since it opened.

Discussing Cause 1 revised

I decided to move to another country for several reasons. First, although I like the place where I live now, it can’t make me feel novel. So I think I can go to another country to find something novel. Second, I have some money, but I don’t have plan of how to spend it, so I think that maybe I can use it to move to another country. Third, I can live different life style in another country. The place I live now is of pressure. If I immigrant to another country, I might get rid of the pressure and enjoy my life. Finally, I can speak a little foreign language, so I think that it isn’t problematic to live in another country. To sum up, I have thought twice before making this decision and I consider it to be a good decision.  

Expressing a opnion 2 revised

I think that students should wear uniform to school. First, everyone wears same costumes so that no one has to worry about what to wear or how to dress up. It won’t bother students. Also, if I were a guest and I went to the school and saw that every one wears uniform, I would think the school is in order rather in a mess. Finally, if you got into trouble after school and you wore uniform then, the teachers or instructors in your school could recognize you in no time and help you. In conclusion, although the uniforms aren’t more beautiful than our clothes, it has many benefits our clothes doesn’t has, so I think it is not bad to wear uniforms.

Expressing a opnion 1 revised

I oppose using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. First, because nuclear power plant will release its heat to the sea around it, so the temperature of sea water around the nuclear power plant will rise so that there will be a coral bleaching. Second,unlike water and wind, nuclear power isn't natural and it isn't renewable energy. It is bad to our environment. Finally, should a nature disaster such as an earthquake or tsunami and so on taken place, nuclear plant would have a lot of damages. The surroundings will be deeply polluted. To sum up, I think that it is not true that using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis. it has many flaws.

discussing effects 2

Global warming will bring some effects to the earth, our daily life. First, the glaciers will melt down so that the surface of ocean will rise. And then many lands will be gone. Second, if the temperature continuously rise, more and more species will be endangered so that there will be less and less creatures in the world. Finally, if the temperature is too high, people will turn on the cooler or other machines to feel comfortable, but it will cause the waste of electricity. To sum up, global warming  influent our daily life and future very much.

discussing effects 1

Opening a new factory can have some positive effects. First of all, it can bring the small town more jobs so that the economics of the small town will be better. Second, if the people there had money, they could buy more modern and novel things so that their quality of life will be advanced. Finally, more jobs can absolutely attracts more people, and the town will be more bustling. In conclusion, opening a new company can make many benefits, and they can make an area more advanced.

contrasting 2 revise

I would hire Lynn for this job. First, although she has less education about English than Debra, she still had been an English instructor once, so I think she has enough professional knowledge to take this job. Second, although her experience is less than Debra, I think that it is enough, too. Third, she is influent in more language than Debra, so I consider her to be a person of many capabilities and passion to learn new things. Finally, she had got the Excellence in Teaching Award, but Debra hadn’t. So, I think that she can teach better than Debra and that she knows how to make students study more. To sum up, maybe Debra knew more than Lynn, but, in addition to professional knowledge, teaching is of central importance, too. So, I chose Lynn to be the English Instructor.

comparing 3 revise

Brian and Jay are my classmates and they have many similarities. First, both of them like sports, such as volley ball, basketball and so on. They usually play volley ball together after school. Second, Brian likes to sleep in classes, and so does Jay. They was seen to be so tired every day that they can sleep in every class. Third, Brian is usually not be able to hand in the assignment, neither is Jay. As a result, they are usually scolded by teachers, and this is a similarity, too.  Finally, they don’t study hard and often fail to exams. It is not strange to see that their tests are full of teachers' red ink.  To sum up, they are really very similar in some way.

cause 2

        Michael opened a small music stores but it was out of business soon. There are some reasons for why the stores closed so fast. First, Michael’s music stores is not far from the two large music stores, so the two will share the guests with the music stores. As a result, the stores’ guests and income will decrease. Second, most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. The kinds are too few for guests to select. And, that will decrease the guests, too. The shop was open Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 P.M. But the time most people go shopping isn’t the times, and the time was too short, too. So, of course, the guests will be few. Finally, Mr. Williams wouldn’t accept checks or credit cards. The inconvenient restriction would lower the willingness of customers to buy the CDs. To sum up, the owner made many mistakes, so it is predictable that the store will close soon.

cause 1

I decided to move to another country, and there are some reasons. First, although I like the place I live now, it can’t make me feel novel. So I think I can go to another country to find something novel. Second, I have some money, but I don’t have plan to how to spend it, so I think that maybe I can use it to move to another country. Thirdly, I can live different life style in another country. The place I live now is of pressure. If I immigrant to another country, I might get rid of the pressure and enjoy my life. Finally, I can speak a little foreign language, so I think that it isn’t problematic to live in another country. To sum up, I have thought twice before making this decision and I consider it to be a good decision.