2011年6月1日 星期三

cause 2

        Michael opened a small music stores but it was out of business soon. There are some reasons for why the stores closed so fast. First, Michael’s music stores is not far from the two large music stores, so the two will share the guests with the music stores. As a result, the stores’ guests and income will decrease. Second, most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. The kinds are too few for guests to select. And, that will decrease the guests, too. The shop was open Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 P.M. But the time most people go shopping isn’t the times, and the time was too short, too. So, of course, the guests will be few. Finally, Mr. Williams wouldn’t accept checks or credit cards. The inconvenient restriction would lower the willingness of customers to buy the CDs. To sum up, the owner made many mistakes, so it is predictable that the store will close soon.

4 則留言:

  1. 只有一間店幹麻+S
    有些文法不對
    要想清楚

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  2. stores
    時態好怪喔 有過去式在連未來式??

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  3. 檢查文法就可以摟^^

    其他的邏輯沒問題!

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  4. store幹麻+S 哈哈

    還不錯ㄚ

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