Global warming will bring some effects to the earth, our daily life. First, the glaciers will melt down so that the surface of ocean will rise. And then many lands will be gone. Second, if the temperature continuously rise, more and more species will be endangered so that there will be less and less creatures in the world. Finally, if the temperature is too high, people will turn on the cooler or other machines to feel comfortable, but it will cause the waste of electricity. To sum up, global warming influent our daily life and future very much.
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回覆刪除LANDS不會槓 會被覆蓋
Global warming will bring some effects to the earth, our daily life....這句在說啥?
回覆刪除influent..+s
surface of ocean 太直翻了ㄅ!!
回覆刪除使用其他機器使感覺更舒服 有點奇怪
可以直接寫電風扇或冷氣就好了阿
surface of ocean -->sea level
回覆刪除其他還好~
結論據也太弱了
the surface of ocean 是在表達什麼...
回覆刪除, the glaciers will melt down so that the surface of ocean will rise
回覆刪除the surface of ocean 改成 sea level 會比較好吧
你是用yahoo翻譯整句的翻譯的嗎?
結論句是= = ?
回覆刪除因為淹水的水不能用阿 你有看過有人把水災的水用來當可用的水嗎= =?
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