Discussing Cause 2 revised

 Michael opened a small music store but it was out of business soon. There are some reasons for why the store closed so fast. First, Michael's music store is not very far from the two large music stores, so the two store will share the guests with the music store. As a result, the store's guests and income will decrease. Second, most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. The kinds are too few for guests to select. And, that will decrease the guests' willingness of come to the store, too. The shop was open Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 P.M. But most people don't go shopping in the time, and the time was too short, too. So, of course, the guests will be few. Finally, Mr. Williams wouldn't accept checks or credit cards. The inconvenient restriction would lower the customers' willingness of buying the CDs in the store. To sum up, the owner made many mistakes, so it has been predictable that the store would close soon since it opened.