2011年6月1日 星期三

cause 1

I decided to move to another country, and there are some reasons. First, although I like the place I live now, it can’t make me feel novel. So I think I can go to another country to find something novel. Second, I have some money, but I don’t have plan to how to spend it, so I think that maybe I can use it to move to another country. Thirdly, I can live different life style in another country. The place I live now is of pressure. If I immigrant to another country, I might get rid of the pressure and enjoy my life. Finally, I can speak a little foreign language, so I think that it isn’t problematic to live in another country. To sum up, I have thought twice before making this decision and I consider it to be a good decision.  

4 則留言:

  1. 主題句可以直接合成:.... for several reasons.
    the place WHERE I live now
    plan of how to ....
    third 因為你之前都沒有ly 這邊應該一樣

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  2. plan 完成式喔
    最好一些錢就可以移民!!
    然後你的口說... 不成問題嗎??

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  3. Second,的那點阿...
    就是你說你沒有計畫可是你其實已經有想法啦?


    看到樓上的回答,第二點改掉吧^^

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  4. 突然變成 thirdly耶 跳痛

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